Factoidz is a concisely written, factually based article providing valuable content.
Concisely Written
Use active voice whenever possible. Reread your article and eliminate redundant words.
Redundant Examples
Bad:
New innovations in the field of automotive technology
Good:
Innovations in automotive technology
Active vs. Passive Examples
Bad:
The car was waxed in the garage by the mechanic.
Good:
The mechanic waxed the car in the garage.
Factual
Factual doesn’t mean that you have to make your article boring and dry. However, you don’t have license to assert information as fact when it is opinion. Avoid sweeping generalizations, broad characterizations and stereotyping. Be precise.
Articles about politics, religion and faith are not prohibited but they must be accurate. It is important when writing articles about these controversial and often contentious subjects to state the issue or topic clearly and concisely, cite your sources, provide further references and let the reader draw a conclusion.
Bad statement:
Democrats have a large percentage of college students.
Better statement:
According to the 2010, XYZ Poll, 60% percent of college students identify themselves as Democrats.
Bad statement:
Christians baptize their babies to ensure they go to heaven.
Better statement:
The theology of baptism varies according to the doctrine of each denomination. (you may then elaborate according to doctrinal statements by various denominations with sources cited)
Citing Sources for Factual Articles
Your brother’s wife’s uncle who is a lawyer is not a good source. However, citing a law or an act by title or number is a good source. You may also reference blogs from law firms.
Make sure you are using references that have credibility, or at the very least, provide resources for additional reading.
Idea Articles
Articles on home management, decorating, gardening, parenting and other articles that present ideas and suggestions are appropriate and valuable. These articles do not lend themselves to extensive citations and references. They are often experience based. Be sure to write with authority. A brief biography at the end of your article may be helpful to validate your expertise in the subject. Choose your topics and titles to cover a specific aspect of a broader subject.
Bad:
Feeding a Picky Child
Good:
Ten Ways to Sneak Vegetables into Your Child’s Dinner
Bad:
How to Plant a Flower Garden
Good:
Ten Most Popular Flowers for an English Cottage Garden
Good:
Flower Gardens for Small Spaces
Article Construction
A well constructed article has an introduction, sections with headings and a conclusion. Bullet points are helpful and stand out nicely when making lists. It is not necessary to label your introduction. Your conclusion should not be labeled “Conclusion”; leave your conclusion without a section heading or consider using italics for a couple short sentences to delineate it from the final section.
If your article is very long, consider breaking it up into two or more articles. A very long article can be tedious and if a reader can’t find the information quickly he may just click out and go on to find another resource. Just remember that Factoidz policy does not allow for series articles that are labeled “Part I”, “Part 2”, etc. Title your articles so each one stands alone.
Proofread and Preview
Even the best writers make mistakes. After saving your article, preview it. Read it through thoroughly, don’t skim. Read it word for word, deliberately and slowly. Look for awkward sentences, superfluous words, excessive passive voice, spelling and punctuation errors. Pay particular attention to words that are not caught with spell check that may be used improperly:
Careful construction with attention to sentence structure, spelling and grammar is the mark of a good writer. Be sure to link your work to other articles you have written and establish your credibility with readers.
Writing for Factoidz is an excellent hobby and a venue for experienced writers who earn a great living from their freelance work.
Nice tips for writing an article especially for the beginners.Thanks.
Nice presentation, Judith.
"Articles about politics, religion and faith are not prohibited but they must be accurate." I've seen more than a few here that were nothing but editorials, commercials or campaign statements. I know of one such article on Ron Paul which rightly got the axe,
I agree 100% that there are too many articles that are opinion pieces or smears or campaign pieces that are exactly as you say. I have also seen some horriblly inaccurate articles on religion and some of the most ridiculous claims and assertions about various things. We seriously need to have the "flag this article" back. I would like to see a "flag" button with a drop down menu so you can select the reason: 1. factually incorrect 2. excessive grammatical errors 3. opinion 4. offensive content.
You are going to have some legitimate opinion. In movie, book and TV reviews, for example, there's absolutely no getting around it – unless they want robots writing reviews.
absolutely nice tips
You make it sound so simple, I can easily tell which sentence is bad, and which is good, but when faced only with my own sentence it is tougher to think of a better one. Thanks though, I will try harder.
Yes, it is clear that reviews and things like movies do require opinion.
Very informative, I like the tips and will try to take them on.
Great advice, thanks, voted & now following!
I like the good and bad examples that you provide. Very informative.
nice article!
Great tips for creating professional articles -- voted!
Judith, you have done a great job with this article. It will be very useful many of us.
Very useful ideas.
Very well written! Thanks for you're advice. This is valuable information!
I would add one more topic in the proofread and preview section. Check your hyperlinks before publishing. You want to ensure that if someone clicks on your link that it works :-)
Yes, excellent addition Pam. I have several reviews with broken links but there is nothing I can do about them unfortunately. Several others have reported this as well on the reviews or product comparison reports.
Judith, I'm so sorry -- The "you" was not pointed directly at you. It was to our fellow readers. I just wanted to clarify that. :-)
@pam I thought you were meaning the general "you" :) - No offense taken. I just wanted to point the problem out that a lot of people have commented about their broken links on the reviews and comparison reports. It's so frustrating because they don't get fixed and it seems that there is nothing you can do about it no matter how many times you write to factoidz.
Good points.
Good examples.